Hello, my readers!
Book Four in my Prince Malock World fantasy series, The Coronation of Prince Malock, is set for release later this month or early December, depending on how fast things go. As a result, I’ve had to write up a good sales blurb to be used on its production description pages to get readers to buy it.
But I’m just not sure if this blurb is as interesting as I think it is. Therefore, I’m posting it here for y’all to comment on and tell me what you think. I will take ALL suggestions into account as long when I revise this blurb (as long as they aren’t spammy or anything, obviously).
Here’s the blurb:
“With the unexpected death of his father the king, Prince Tojas Malock of Carnag is forced to don the mantle of King of Carnag amid persistent rumors of the corruption of his friend, Skimif, who recently took on the role of God of Martir. Even as Malock fights to keep Carnag from joining the ever-growing coalition of Northern nations that are against Skimif’s rule, doubt gnaws at the back of his mind, causing him to wonder just how righteous his old friend really is.
Ever since moving to the frigid far north, hundreds of miles away from the rest of civilization, with her adoptive father Quro, Jenur Takren believes that she can finally live the life of peace and normalcy that she’s always desired. Yet when an old enemy appears, seeking to kill her and her father for their past sins, Jenur is forced one again to use her skills of assassination to defend not only her own life, but that of her father’s as well.
In the final book in the main Prince Malock World series, Prince Malock and Jenur Takren struggle with truth and lies as their real enemy plots and plans behinds the scenes. Yet even if they discover the truth, they may be too late to stop it.”
What do you think? Good? Bad? Interesting? Boring? Maybe needs a couple of tweaks here and there? Throw it out and try again?
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